Segment 1
-Harry
the bar man watches the special ops team enter the bar (he doesn't
know who they are)
-He
thinks to himself about how close they all seem, and that they must
be celebrating
-He
asks them what they want and a beautiful girl (Angelina) tells him
what they'll have.
-Harry
gets what they need, and hands it to them
-Harry
overhears them talking about why they're celebrating and is curious
but decides to ignore it.
Segment 2
-Micro
gets talking about some nerdy new product that came out, and people
start hushing him up Angelina especially
-Jared
sits and drinks his drink quietly, while listening to Angelina
talk...and talk
-Polly
moves over to Grant and flirts with him subtly but he doesn't notice
-Grant
begins to tell her about a man called Dr. Herron, that they've been
searching for Herron for years; they don’t know what he’s
planning, but he’s a hacker who shows up every now and then online,
getting into copyrighted work and stealing codes.
-He
mentiones that they've finally tracked him to an address.
Segment 3
-Micro
comes into the conversation and explains how they found Dr. Herron,
much to the annoyance of Grant who wants Micro to shut up so he can
talk more personally with Polly
-Micro
expresses his admiration for a hacker like Dr. Herron
-Polly
politely redirects Micro to the bar for another drink to distract him
-Grant
has a “moment” with Polly where he says something flattering
about her abilities, and she takes it as a come on.
-Grant
asks her to go to the address to find out more about Dr. Herron.
-The
night goes on, as Harry the bartender continues to wash glasses and
serve drinks.
Can we talk really fast about point of view? I just forgot that we never really specified. Do we want first person, third person limited, third person omniscient, and can our narrator switch between various minds?
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