Monday, October 15, 2012

Chapter 2 Full Scene Outline

I've put up a link to the google doc overhead, which has several tabs, one of them is the outline tab and you'll notice that I've already filled out the chapter 2 sections.  This is roughly what it should look like.  Here's what I put:

Segment 1
-Harry the bar man watches the special ops team enter the bar (he doesn't know who they are)
-He thinks to himself about how close they all seem, and that they must be celebrating
-He asks them what they want and a beautiful girl (Angelina) tells him what they'll have.
-Harry gets what they need, and hands it to them
-Harry overhears them talking about why they're celebrating and is curious but decides to ignore it.

Segment 2
-Micro gets talking about some nerdy new product that came out, and people start hushing him up Angelina especially
-Jared sits and drinks his drink quietly, while listening to Angelina talk...and talk
-Polly moves over to Grant and flirts with him subtly but he doesn't notice
-Grant begins to tell her about a man called Dr. Herron, that they've been searching for Herron for years; they don’t know what he’s planning, but he’s a hacker who shows up every now and then online, getting into copyrighted work and stealing codes.
-He mentiones that they've finally tracked him to an address.

Segment 3
-Micro comes into the conversation and explains how they found Dr. Herron, much to the annoyance of Grant who wants Micro to shut up so he can talk more personally with Polly
-Micro expresses his admiration for a hacker like Dr. Herron
-Polly politely redirects Micro to the bar for another drink to distract him
-Grant has a “moment” with Polly where he says something flattering about her abilities, and she takes it as a come on.
-Grant asks her to go to the address to find out more about Dr. Herron.
-The night goes on, as Harry the bartender continues to wash glasses and serve drinks.

1 comment:

  1. Can we talk really fast about point of view? I just forgot that we never really specified. Do we want first person, third person limited, third person omniscient, and can our narrator switch between various minds?

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